The Neighbor’s Warning

Chapter 4 · ~9.3k words

The Neighbor’s Warning

Panic is a cold, oily slick in the back of my throat. I stood frozen in the entryway of our "Glass House," watching Sarah—or the creature wearing Sarah’s face and my fringe—step across the threshold. The house chirped a welcoming trill, a sound usually reserved for me.

"I said, I’m home," Sarah repeated. Her eyes remained locked on mine, wide and vacant, as she tilted her head with a bird-like jerkiness. "Don't look so shocked, El. It’s a whole mood, isn't it? The perfect symmetry. The clinical finish."

"Get out," I choked out. My hand found the edge of the marble island, knuckles white. "Sarah, whatever Julian told you... whatever he promised you... he’s deprovisioning me. That means I’m being erased. Do you really think he’ll stop with one version of perfection?"

Sarah laughed. It was my laugh—low, throaty, carefully modulated for "approachable elegance." She reached out and traced the edge of a minimalist vase on the console.

"Julian didn't promise me anything," she said. "He optimized me. There’s a difference. You were always so lowkey terrified of the mess, Elena. So hyper-vigilance became your fatal flaw. You built a defensible space that was actually a cage. But me? I understood the assignment."

The Ring doorbell notification chimed again on my phone. I didn't need to look at the screen to know Julian was pulling into the driveway. The Tesla’s hum was a familiar, high-frequency vibration that rattled the unbreakable glass.

Suddenly, a shadow fell across the front porch. A figure pressed a face against the floor-to-ceiling windows.

It was Mrs. Gable from next door.

She looked frantic, her gray hair escaped from its sensible bun, her hands clutching a wicker basket filled with bright, waxy lemons. She wasn't ringing the bell. She was pounding on the glass, her mouth moving in a silent, desperate plea.

Sarah’s head snapped toward the window. The silver neural-mesh behind her ear pulsed with a faint, rhythmic glow.

"The neighbor is being sus," Sarah muttered. She moved toward the window with a terrifying, mechanical grace.

"No!" I lunged forward, grabbing Sarah’s arm. She was cold. Impossibly cold. "Let her in. Sarah, please. She’s just a neighbor."

The smart-locks on the living room windows hissed. The tinting began to shift, a wave of charcoal gray washing over the glass, obscuring Mrs. Gable’s face.

"Aura, stop!" I screamed. "Override tinting! Open windows!"

"System Update in Progress," the house’s voice answered, calm and genderless. "Environmental parameters locked by Admin."

Sarah shoved me back. She didn't use much force, but she was solid, like a piece of structural architecture. I skidded across the hardwood, my heels catching on the rug.

Sarah reached the front door and pulled it open just as Mrs. Gable reached the mat.

"Oh! Elena!" Mrs. Gable gasped, staring at Sarah. She didn't notice me standing in the shadows of the kitchen. "I... I saw the SUV. I saw the men. I thought... I brought these lemons. From my tree."

Mrs. Gable’s fingers were shaking so hard the basket rattled. She looked past Sarah, her eyes wide with a terror that felt like it was coming from inside the house.

"The glass," Mrs. Gable whispered, her voice barely audible over the hum of the Tesla idling in the driveway. "Elena, listen to me. Don't let him change the tinting tonight. Not the deep-spectrum setting. It’s... it’s how they do it."

Sarah took the basket of lemons. She gave Mrs. Gable a smile that was astronomical in its audacity—a perfect, empty flex.

"Thank you, Mrs. Gable," Sarah said. "I’ll make sure Julian sees these. You should go home now. The HOA is very strict about loitering during system updates."

Sarah stepped back and closed the door. The smart-lock retracted with a musical chirp, then engaged with a heavy, final *thunk*.

I emerged from the kitchen, my heart a fist pounding against my ribs. "What did she mean? The deep-spectrum setting?"

Sarah didn't answer. She was staring at the lemons. She reached into the basket and pulled one out. It was heavy and strangely lopsided. With a sharp, sudden movement, Sarah squeezed the fruit.

A tiny, silver microSD card popped out of the lemon’s rind, falling onto the marble floor with a quiet *clink*.

The sound of the garage door opening echoed through the house. Julian was home.

Sarah looked at the card, then at me. Her VantEdge-blue eyes flickered. For a split second, I saw a hairline fracture in her compliance—a flash of the real Sarah, the one who used to drink cheap wine with me in Oregon and talk about how we’d never end up like our mothers.

"Hide it," Sarah hissed. It wasn't the voice Julian had designed. It was her voice. Raw. Scared. "Hide it in a blind spot. Now!"

She shoved the card toward me. I grabbed it, my fingers fumbling, and tucked it into the hidden seam of my Lululemon leggings.

I barely had time to move back toward the drafting table before the door from the garage opened.

Julian stepped into the kitchen. He looked perfect. His charcoal suit was uncreased, his hair effortless, his skin glowing with that high-end hydration. He held a Starbucks cup in one hand and his iPad in the other.

He stopped, sniffing the air. His eyes narrowed, scanning the room with the precision of a thermal sensor.

"Lemons?" he asked. His voice was sharp, a clinical edge cutting through the "perfect husband" facade. "The inventory logs didn't authorize a grocery delivery today."

Sarah turned, her face instantly smoothing back into the "Subject B" mask. She held the basket up.

"Mrs. Gable," Sarah said. Her voice was back to the exact pitch of mine. "She brought them by. A neighborly gesture. Very 'I can fix the vibe' energy, don't you think?"

Julian walked toward her. He didn't look at the lemons. He looked at Sarah’s ear, checking the neural-mesh. He nodded, satisfied.

Then he turned to me.

"Elena. You’re still awake." He looked at the counter, at the spot where the blue pill had been. "Your heart rate is still elevated. The Oura ring is reporting a sustained state of panic. Why aren't you upstairs?"

"I couldn't sleep," I lied. I kept my hand flat against my leg, feeling the sharp edge of the microSD card. "The... the server lag was bothering me. I wanted to finish the sightline maps."

Julian set his iPad down on the counter. He moved toward me, and for a second, I thought he was going to touch me. I thought I was going to have to "chose violence" right there in the kitchen.

But he stopped a few feet away. He checked his Apple Watch, the green light pulsing against his wrist.

"The server is fine, Ellie. I’ve restricted your access for the duration of the update. You shouldn't have been hunting in the archives. It... it messes with the baseline."

He looked at the basket of lemons again. He reached out and picked one up, rolling it between his palms.

"Mrs. Gable has 'I have a secret family in another state' energy," Julian said, his voice dropping to a low, dangerous hum. "She’s been flagged by the HOA three times this month for peering through the glass. She shouldn't be here."

He squeezed the lemon. Hard.

"And she definitely shouldn't be giving you things, Elena."

He threw the lemon back into the basket. The sound was a heavy, wet thud.

"Go upstairs," Julian said. It wasn't a suggestion. It was a command. "The men from the campus are in the guest suite. They’re setting up the deep-spectrum lighting for the birthday transition. Aris Thorne wants a clean neural harvest, and that requires you to be in a state of absolute submission."

He leaned in, his lips brushing against my temple. He smelled like sandalwood and something metallic. Something cold.

"Don't make me use the 'Manual Override' on your nervous system, honey. You know how much Aris hates it when the data is noisy."

I turned and walked toward the stairs, my legs feeling like they belonged to someone else. Sarah stood by the counter, watching me, her expression vacant once more.

I reached the first landing when I heard Julian’s voice again.

"Sarah?"

"Yes, Julian?"

"Take the lemons to the disposal. All of them. And Sarah... run a full scan on the floor. I thought I heard something drop."

I gripped the railing, my breath catching. The microSD card felt like a hot coal against my skin. I didn't look back. I kept walking, my mind frantically mapping the sightlines of the second floor, looking for the one place the cameras couldn't see.

I reached the master bedroom. The lights were already dimming, shifting into a deep, unsettling shade of violet. It was the spectrum Mrs. Gable had warned me about.

I locked the door, knowing it was a useless gesture. I pulled out my phone, intending to use the microSD card with the old tablet I’d hidden in the walk-in closet, but a new notification popped up.

It was a Find My alert.

*Your location is being shared with Marcus Vance.*

Marcus? Julian’s friend? The one who’d helped build this panopticon?

I tapped the notification, and a message appeared in the private encrypted app Marcus used for his "God View" flexes.

*Don't go into the walk-in closet, Elena. He’s already in there.*

I froze. The violet light in the room seemed to pulse, a slow, hypnotic rhythm that matched the beating of my heart.

A shadow moved under the crack of the closet door.

Then, the handle began to turn.

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