The Unexpected Sniper
Chapter 50 · ~7.6k words
Shock is a strobe light, fracturing the world into jagged, incomprehensible frames as I stared at the man who had been my only father figure for twenty years. David amblled forward from the shadows of the cornfield maze, his navy blazer unbothered by the dampness of the Ohio air, the silver device in his hand pulsing a violent, bleeding red. He reached out to touch the port at my temple, his eyes Dilated with a raw, astronomical greed, and for a heartbeat, I felt the floor tiles of the Atrium reassemble themselves beneath my mud-caked heels.
"Who the hell," David whispered, his voice appearing directly in my marrow, "is currently handle the car in Ohio?"
The zero-gravity field engaged with the force of a physical blow, a sensory blitz that made my vision fracture into blue lines. I was falling, the drainage pipe liquefying into a kaleidoscope of broken data, but through the chaos of the systems collapse, I saw the Ring camera feed on my phone flicker one last time. The woman on the porch—the one with my face—wasnt looking at the man with the teddy bear.
She was looking at me.
Then, a sharp crack echoed across the field, a sound like a thousand silver pens clicking at once.
The man in the navy blazer—David, or whatever script was currently running his skin—staggered. The flashlight in his hand spiraled through the air, its beam tracing a frantic, staccato arc across the stalks before hitting the mud. David didn't scream. He just stared at the hole in his chest, a hot mess of pixels and dark, heavy crimson.
"Operational... error," he wheezed, his breathing a wet rattle.
He plummeted into the darkness of the pipe, his molecules being read like a barcode as he dissolved into a swarm of violet pixels. The building’s logic didn't just ignore his remains; it scrubbed them. One second he was the architect of my cage, and the next he was a smudge of static on a manifest that no longer recognized his масса.
I scrambled out of the pipe, my Lululemon leggings snagging on a rusted bolt, tearing a new hole that let the sharp, antiseptic wind bite at my thigh. I grabbed Toby, hauling him through the mud as a second shot echoed, then a third.
"Get down!" I bellowed.
A figure amblled toward us through the towering stalks. He was wearing tactical gear—black carbon fiber plates and a heavy belt—but he’d thrown a civilian structured blazer over the top, a jarring cultural clash that gave off major main character syndrome energy. He was holding a long-range rifle, the barrel still smoking.
I backed away, my hand finding the cool metal of the silver pen in the teddy bear’s stomach. "Plot twist: I Choice violence today. Don't come any closer."
The figure stopped ten feet away. He slide his tactical visor up, and my heart stalled in my chest.
It was Liam.
But Liam was a coward. Liam was the depreciating asset who had run away from the server room while Marcus’s blood was still warm on the floor. This man didn't have the "I can fix him" energy of the Liam I’d shared Whole Foods shopping trips with. He had a cold, algorithmic clarity in his crystalline blue eyes.
"I followed the sedan, Elara," Liam said, his voice dropping into that intimate, raw emotional register he used when he wanted me to ignore a red flag. "I saw Sarah authorize the disposal. I saw David grew a spine only to have it snapped by Julian’s fixers."
"You... you shot him?"
"I couldn't let them have the last word," Liam replied, ambling closer until I could smell the scent of Wood Sage & Sea Salt on his jacket. "Julian promised me your seat, but I understood the assignment. Sterling is offboarding everyone, Elara. The 2.4-pound drive Sarah has? It’s a cascading delete. It was never about a replacement. It was about an audit."
He reached into his tactical vest and pulled out a satellite phone—a heavy, ruggedized brick that looked lowkey prehistoric compared to the Atrium’s tech. He threw it to me.
"Call the Auditor. Liao is the only variable Julian didn't know how to code. Tell her the call is coming from inside the house."
I caught the phone, my fingers glitching as they touched the solid plastic. "Why are you helping me, Liam? You were one bad day away from becoming a true crime podcast subject yourself."
Liam looked at the rifle, then at the smoking ruins of the Atrium visible on the horizon. "Relationship red flags? This was a whole communist parade, Elara. I’m in my villain era now. And Julian Vane is the only line of code I want to delete."
I checked the phone. 100% signal. I amblled back toward the SUV, my heels clicking a rhythmic, final beat on the dirt. My Roman Empire was figuring out who to trust, and right now, the only person with a gun was the man who had just saved my life after selling it for equity points.
"The summer house," I whispered. "My mother is there, Liam. She said David hid her."
"David didn't hide her, Elara," Liam said, his voice a melodic baritone mirror of the building’s OS. "He mapped her. The woman in Ohio isn't Meredith Vance. She’s Version Two. And she’s currently handle the car that’s coming for us."
I looked at the burner phone. The Life360 circle was no longer moving south. It was stationary.
It was right behind us.
The headlights of a black sedan cut through the cornfield, two white-hot eyes that turned the stalks into a forest of long, skeletal shadows. The car didn't slow down. It amblled through the rows with a Decisive, rhythmic snap, the tires crushing the dry corn into a soup of dust and cellulose.
"They're here," Toby whispered, his eyes Dilated with terror.
I opened the satellite phone and dialed the number etched into my memory. Commissioner Liao answered on the first ring.
"Liao. I have the manifest. I have the medical waivers from 1998. And I have the 2.4-pound drive that Sarah thinks is a decoy."
"Elara Vance?" Liao’s voice was sharp, clinical, giving off major Real Housewives energy. "You’re marked as a 'Legacy Guard' asset. Sterling just authorized a wellness check with extreme prejudice. Where are you?"
"I'm in a blank spot on the map," I said, my voice appearing as a block of red text on the SUV’s dashboard behind me. "I need protection. And I need you to authorize the purge of Julian Vane’s credentials. Now."
"The audit is complete, Vance," Liao replied. "But the data in the pen... I need that card. If you give it to me, I can make you permanent. You’ll have a life, Elara. A quiet, non-geographic life with Toby."
I looked at the micro-SD card in my hand. It contained my mother’s location. The original. If I gave it to Liao, it became public record. Julian would find her. Sarah would mirror her. Version One would be deleted to make room for Version Three.
"I need an hour," I said.
The black sedan skidded to a halt twenty feet away. The doors opened with a Decisive, rhythmic snap.
A woman stepped out. She was wearing my favourite chestnut blazer. She carried my tote. She amblled toward me with a soft, clinical smile that made the floor tiles of the Atrium begin to unscrew themselves in my mind.
"Plot twist," the woman said, her voice appearing directly in my skull.
She wasn't Sarah. She wasn't my mother.
She was a version of me that hadn't seen the fire.
The woman raised a small, silver device—the actual pen Arthur Sterling had used—and meeting my gaze through the glass of the SUV, she whispered the four words that proved the simulation was currently authorized for a reset.
"Version Zero is you."
Then she turned the pen toward the newborn baby in the backseat—the baby I hadn't realized was there—and the last thing I saw before the world turned into a photograph of a Target parking lot was—