Dr. Thorne
Chapter 17 · ~9.2k words

"You're not drinking," Julian said.
It wasn't a question. It was an accusation, wrapped in the smooth, buttery tone of a host who had just opened a bottle of vintage Pinot Noir and was disappointed in his guest's lack of appreciation.
He was standing right next to me, his hand resting on the small of my back. It felt like a brand. A claim of ownership.
I looked at the glass in my hand. The bubbles in the champagne were dying, one by one.
"I have a headache," I said. "The music."
"Nonsense," he said, leaning in close. I could smell the expensive scotch on his breath, mixed with the peppermint he always chewed before speaking to investors. "You're tense, Elena. Relax. Enjoy the moment."
He gestured to the room with his free hand.
"Look at them," he said. "They love you."
I looked.
The guests were a sea of designer silk and tailored wool, a moving mosaic of wealth and influence. They were laughing, drinking, admiring the view through the floor-to-ceiling windows.
But they weren't looking at me. They were looking at the house.
At the clean lines. The brutalist concrete. The way the light played off the glass.
They were admiring the cage.
And Julian was the zookeeper.
"They don't know me," I whispered.
"They know what I tell them," he said. "And I tell them you're the perfect muse."
He squeezed my waist. Hard.
"Don't disappoint me, Elena. Not tonight."
I felt the bile rise in my throat. It tasted like fear and old coffee.
I looked across the room.
Kieran was standing by the bar, holding a tray of empty glasses. He was wearing a white waiter's jacket that was a size too small, the sleeves straining against his arms. He looked terrified.
His eyes met mine.
Wide. Panic-stricken.
He gave a tiny, imperceptible shake of his head.
*Don't do it.*
But I had to.
I had the blade taped to my thigh. I had the plan. I had the rage.
But most of all... I had the fear.
The fear that if I didn't do it tonight, I never would.
"Ladies and gentlemen!" Julian's voice boomed across the room, silencing the chatter. "If I could have your attention for a moment."
The guests turned. Fifty faces, expectant, smiling.
Julian raised his glass.
"Tonight is a celebration," he said. "A celebration of vision. Of perseverance. Of sanctuary."
He looked at me. His eyes were shining.
"To sanctuary," he said.
"To sanctuary!" the guests echoed.
I raised my glass. My hand was trembling.
"To home," Julian added.
"To home!"
I looked at the pillar.
It stood in the center of the Nave, a massive column of grey concrete that supported the entire cantilevered structure. It was the spine of the house.
And the tomb.
I took a step forward.
Julian's hand tightened on my waist. "Where are you going?"
"I need air," I said.
"Stay," he hissed. "We're not done."
"I'm going to be sick," I said.
It wasn't a lie. I felt dizzy. The room was spinning. The faces of the guests were blurring into a single, grotesque mask.
Julian looked at me. He saw the sweat on my forehead. The pallor of my skin.
He sighed. Annoyed.
"Fine," he said. "Go to the Nave. Get some air. But come right back."
He let go.
I walked away. My legs felt like they were made of wood. I could feel his eyes on my back, burning.
I walked toward the Nave.
The glass box.
The floor was clear. Transparent. Below, the ocean churned against the rocks, a hundred feet down.
It was terrifying. And beautiful.
I stepped onto the glass.
It felt solid. Cold.
I walked to the center. To the pillar.
I put my hand on the concrete. It was cool, rough.
"I know you're in there," I whispered.
Sofia. Beatriz.
The driver.
I closed my eyes.
I could feel them. Their presence. Their weight.
The house wasn't just built on stone. It was built on bones.
"Mrs. Mercer?"
A voice.
I opened my eyes.
A man was standing near the doorway. Tall. Silver hair.
Chief Santos.
He was holding a glass of whiskey. He smiled.
"Enjoying the view?"
I stared at him.
"You know," I said.
His smile didn't waver.
"Know what, my dear?"
"About the women," I said. "About the passports."
He took a sip of his drink.
"Mr. Mercer is a very generous man," he said. "He does a lot for this island. The economy. The tourism."
He walked toward me. He stepped onto the glass without hesitation.
"Sometimes," he said, "people get lost. They wander off. The cliffs are dangerous."
He shrugged.
"It's a tragedy. But life goes on."
He was part of it.
He wasn't just incompetent. He was complicit.
He was the gatekeeper.
I felt a cold, hard knot of hatred form in my stomach.
"He pays you," I said.
"He supports the local police benevolent fund," Santos corrected. "Generously."
He looked down at the ocean.
"It's a long way down," he said. "You should be careful, Mrs. Mercer. Accidents happen."
It was a threat.
Plain and simple.
I looked at him. I looked at the gun on his hip.
I looked back at the party.
Julian was watching us. He raised his glass in a mock salute.
They were all in on it. The architect. The police chief. The doctor.
The whole system was rigged.
I was trapped.
I looked at Kieran.
He was still by the bar. He was watching me.
He put the tray down.
He started to move.
Not toward me.
Toward the fire alarm.
It was on the wall, near the kitchen door. A small red box.
He caught my eye.
He nodded.
*Now.*
I took a deep breath.
I looked at Santos.
"You're right," I said. "Accidents happen."
I raised my glass.
And I dropped it.
*Smash.*
The crystal shattered on the glass floor. Shards flew. Champagne splashed onto Santos's shoes.
He jumped back, startled.
"What the hell?"
"Oops," I said.
And then...
*REE-REE-REE-REE.*
The fire alarm.
It was deafening. A high-pitched shriek that cut through the room like a knife.
The strobe lights began to flash. White. Blinding.
Panic.
The guests started screaming. They dropped their drinks. They pushed toward the door.
"Fire!" someone yelled.
"Get out!"
Julian was shouting something, but I couldn't hear him over the alarm. He was trying to push through the crowd, trying to get to me.
But the crowd was a wall. A terrified, stampeding wall.
Santos looked at the door. Then at me.
"Stay here!" he yelled.
He turned and ran. Toward the exit.
Coward.
I was alone.
In the Nave.
With the pillar.
I reached down. I grabbed the hem of my dress.
I ripped the tape.
I pulled out the blade.
The X-Acto knife.
It glinted in the strobe light.
I looked at the floor. At the glass.
I knew exactly where to hit.
I had studied the blueprints. I had done the math.
The tension point. The keystone.
If I broke the seal... if I compromised the vacuum...
The whole thing would go.
I knelt.
I placed the tip of the blade against the seam. Where the glass met the concrete.
I pressed.
"Elena!"
Julian.
He had broken through the crowd. He was running toward me. His face was twisted with rage.
He saw the knife.
He saw what I was doing.
"Don't!" he screamed.
He lunged.
I didn't flinch.
I didn't hesitate.
I pushed the blade in.
*Crack.*
It was a small sound. A pop.
But it was enough.
A white line appeared in the glass. A fracture.
It started at the blade and shot outward. Like a snake.
Julian stopped.
He was ten feet away. Standing on the glass.
He looked down.
He saw the crack.
It was moving toward him. Fast.
"No," he whispered.
The floor groaned. A deep, sick sound.
The vacuum seal broke.
The air rushed in.
And the glass...
It exploded.
Not out.
Down.
The entire floor just... dropped.
Julian fell.
He didn't have time to scream. He just disappeared.
One second he was there. The next, he was gone.
I threw myself backward. Toward the solid floor of the living room.
My fingers clawed at the wood. I scrambled, kicking, fighting for purchase.
The glass beneath my legs gave way.
I felt myself falling.
I screamed.
And then... a hand.
Strong. Rough.
It grabbed my wrist.
Kieran.
He was lying on the floor, reaching out. He had anchored himself against the doorframe.
"I got you!" he yelled.
He pulled.
I scrabbled with my feet. I found the edge of the beam. I pushed.
He hauled me up.
I collapsed onto the hardwood floor, gasping, shaking.
I looked back.
The Nave was gone.
Just a hole. A jagged, gaping mouth in the side of the house.
And below...
Nothing.
Just the dark, churning water.
And silence.
The alarm was still ringing. The lights were still flashing.
But Julian was gone.
I looked at Kieran.
He was pale. Sweating. But he was alive.
"Did we get him?" he asked.
I crawled to the edge. I looked down.
The water was black. But in the moonlight, I could see something.
A piece of white shirt. Floating.
And then... it sank.
"Yeah," I whispered. "We got him."
Kieran let out a breath.
"We have to go," he said. "The police..."
"They're busy," I said. "Looking for the fire."
I stood up. My legs were shaking.
"The van," I said. "Is it ready?"
"Engine's running," he said.
We ran.
Through the kitchen. Out the back door.
Into the night.
The air was cool. Fresh.
It smelled of rain. And smoke.
And freedom.
I didn't look back.
Not once.
I got in the van. Kieran got in the passenger seat.
I put it in gear.
I drove.
Away from the House of Mercy. Away from the cage.
Away from the architect.
I looked at the road ahead.
It was dark. Winding. Dangerous.
But it was open.
And for the first time in my life